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Fourth of my top four sins, and the fourth of The Seven Sisters; ENVY. :pumpkin: :la: :pumpkin:

This one I think was the one ~Neko-MEME88 was looking forward to the most, only because Shii-chan, Demon of Envy and I actually DO look so much alike. ^^; Not only that, but like Shii, I'm exceedingly awkward in my own skin, and DO envy a lot of people. :XD:

I like how the colors in this turned out. Recently, Shii-chan's pants aren't like this, they're more POOFY. But I personally liked her older version pants. The bright orange stripes and slick wide bottoms were so freakishly awesome. :love:

If you're wondering what's wrong with this picture, yes, I did go to the trouble of shrinking down my bust size for three reasons:

1. I wanted to stay true to Shii-chan's image.
2. Shii-chan already envies any girl who is busty, so no, I am not adding insult to injury.
And 3. Because I personally do envy a small bust size, hence the "Dammit, I wish my boobs were this small" look. :laughing:

Four down, three more to go! :dummy:
:pumpkin::iconpumpkinplz::iconhappypumpkinplz::iconpumpkinplz::pumpkin:Happy Halloween to all!:pumpkin::iconpumpkinplz::iconhappypumpkinplz::iconpumpkinplz::pumpkin:




(C) Shii-chan's clothes: :iconneko-meme88:

Critiques


:icontraitor-or-sai:
This picture as a whole intrigues me. I love the coloration of the entire the thing and the shading is to die for. Your subject's composure also fits the colors you chose for the piece. The details of just the outfit itself look simple and yet complicated all at the same time. And the hair? Amazing, i love the shine and shading in the tail fur. The flipflops made me giggle but they fit in with the tone of the piece. Same with the outfit in general. This piece looks well put together. Overall i really like what you did with this, hope to see more of this stuff in the future :D Good job!
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:iconjeremycoatney:
Ah, a look at a true depiction of envy itself. I LOVE this picture so much for not falling to the wrathful, bitchy, or otherwise dangerously unstable envy crowd. I HATE it when people do that!!!

A poor downtrodden individual which can’t help but stew in her bottomless desire to become something that she is not, but that she constantly sees in others, this depiction of envy make you feel sorry for her. She honestly looks like someone should give her a hug or something to put a smile back on that face.

A really cute outfit, particularly the Mr. Game And Watch on the shirt and the combination of toe socks and fingerless arm warmers is always a welcome combination due to the fact both are out of the ordinary. The color combination and coloring job on this one is really well done.

The shading and shadows in general are good where present, but mysteriously absent in a few spots if you are the sort of person who sits and squints at the patterns on someone’s shorts. To be fair though the shorts are mostly BLACK and adding a darker shade of black to it is just not possible. There are some tricks for getting around that by using a really dark other color which looks black or almost black and then using a slightly darker still color to add shadows and shading to it, but that can also just end up looking bizarre.

I give this one a 5 of 5 for vision because it really nails the presentation of the idea, and the idea is not one which I often seen.

As I just said, this is not something you generally see in a depiction of envy. Typically some sort of angry wrathful being is involved or some other kind of insidious medium of expression. I can’t properly express how much that annoys me both in fiction and in life. If I feel envious of something I either just keep it to myself and stew or it turns into a feeling of admiration, and I say something complimentary towards whomever generated the feeling. I give this picture a 5 of 5 for originality.

A very well drawn picture with a single, barely noticeable visual oddity to it. Probably would go unnoticed by most people anyway. A 5 of 5 for technique.

Mixed feelings on impact. On the one hand I feel really bad for this person and want to do something to make them feel less sad. On the other hand I am filled with joy at the fact they aren’t a spiteful foaming mouthed bitch. A 5 of 5 for impact either way I suppose.
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:iconjinxkat007:
I know what you mean wanting a smaller bust size D: Good job, love your work as always :D

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:iconalone-and-ignored:
:XD: u and me both, i wnt B's gosh darnit > 3< *flails* but anyways o wo i find this one to be my favourite XD idk why just sumthing about it > w9 great job sissy :D ur almost there

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:iconechidna-kid:
Toe socks and flip flops!! Best fashion statement ever!

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:iconnomyai:
I really like the colors! The expression of saddness and want is just grand.

Nice work.

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:iconneko-meme88:
lol, funny thing about her?

she Envy's your bust size. <XD

but yes, YAAY!!! THREE MORE LEFT!!! >X3

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We kill with a smile..:D
:iconmaskakta:
three more to go xD
:iconnotanothervillain:
big or small, boobs of all sizes are beautiful. *bites tongue*

you look mighty sad, your facial expression is priceless. great pic!

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:icontendrak:
Wow...this is just spectacularly beautiful.

I'm all kinds of in love with this pic. ^_^

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:iconmoreuse:
aw! *hug* but your very pritty and you have a nice personality, slightly shy but a good personality.

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